A crop to remove the white area from the bottom right side was suggested, easy done. What are the thoughts on this one
The Original
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Critique 2 from this morning
Critique 2 from this morning
Image number 2 Train on Turntable.
A crop to remove the white area from the bottom right side was suggested, easy done. What are the thoughts on this one
The Original The cropped version
A crop to remove the white area from the bottom right side was suggested, easy done. What are the thoughts on this one
The Original The cropped version
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Sue
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Paul Jones
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Re: Critique 2 from this morning
I prefer the cropped version, but take the crop down a few more pixels so you're not cutting off the bottom of the plaque.
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Re: Critique 2 from this morning
The cropped version is better and I agree with suggestion re the plaque. Personal preference only, but for me the colour is a bit strong and the sky muddy (could be my monitor) - however I like the composition and the curve leading you into the image. Nice shot.
Janice.
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