Critique From this Morning

[Sue]

Following on from this mornings critique I have had a go at some of the suggestions. Please feel free to add comments, (good or bad) The tea & coffee will still be the same

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021 The Lady.jpg (175.72 KiB) Viewed 10752 times

This is a variation on the same theme

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[Paul Jones]

For me, the new versions are much better.

More interesting eyes on photo 1 and you've tidied up the neck area.

Better scattering of images on the joiner and you've raised the exposure so it's not as muddy.

I like the Skipool image.

I envy your creativity Sue.

[Sue]

Thanks Paul

[Gordon Armstrong]

The joiner is much better. The scatter looks much more natural and the white is less dominant. Breaking up the lines of the image has introduced a real sense of movement. The exposure is also brighter and better for it.

I like the creek image. Using the image as the background really works here.

Gordon.

[Sue]

Thanks for your comments Gordon much appreciated

[mikeaspinall]

Hi Sue

Your expertise is amazing and the changes do improve the images. I said to you on Saturday that these kind of
pictures are not my cup of tea (obvious really in my case as I don't understand Photoshop) but I can appreciate the
work you have done to create the images.
Well done Boss Lady.

[Sue]

Thank you for your comments Michael

[mikeaspinall]

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[mikeaspinall]

Hi

Thought that I would add my five pennyworth on Saturday morning. Herewith the original 'Guitarist' and then the
final version after advice from the mighty John and Paul.