Teasel
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Teasel
Comment and critique requested please.
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It's sharp where it should be and the out of focus background teasels add to the sense of depth of the image. A pleasant arrangement just leaving me a bit uninspired by the actual subject. The wide border is bold and complements the colours in the image and I could imagine it as a print mounted on a board of that colour. This could work. Usually it doesn't, but here could be one of the rare exceptions.
I think you've made a good job of this, just not the most exciting subject. Hope that doesn't sound over-critical, it's not meant to!

I think you've made a good job of this, just not the most exciting subject. Hope that doesn't sound over-critical, it's not meant to!


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Thanks for taking the time to reply, I do agree it is lacking something, I was hoping for a goldfinch to land on it as they are apparently rather fond of teasels but it wasn't to be 

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Hi Pauline
I agree with John's summation, but it's well taken and a good test of your photographic skills and I'm sure you enjoyed the practice. If it was a brightly coloured flower it might have more impact.
Thanks for posting.
I agree with John's summation, but it's well taken and a good test of your photographic skills and I'm sure you enjoyed the practice. If it was a brightly coloured flower it might have more impact.
Thanks for posting.

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