Fantastic, you've done a great job here paul. prefer the three top right and bottom left and right, the first image seems a bit too light top left to me. A minor point though because they're all great photos.
John - I know what you mean and take your point. It turned out more or less how I wanted, but could be better. I see a lot of fashion shots that have been shot into the light, often with some flare, and I was aiming for that look. I need more practice.