Photo shoot I did last week

stopher002 · Post by **stopher002** » Wed Aug 24, 2016 6:27 pm

Will not be able to make this Thurs meeting at the club. (working nights AGAIN!!!!)

Looking for some CC good or bad, be as brutal as you wish.

Take at PURE studios in Preston
Model - Jodie-Leigh

Cheers
Chris
07710319002

Tracey McGovern · Post by **Tracey McGovern** » Wed Aug 24, 2016 9:41 pm

I like it Chris. Good eye contact, she looks engaged with you. I like the muted colours of the background which falls softly away forcing all your attention on her face. I like the low down capture. I can't see anything wrong with this at all. It's great.

Tracey

stopher002 · Post by **stopher002** » Thu Aug 25, 2016 1:56 am

Thanks Tracey
I wish she was engaged to me. LOL
I noticed from the up load the image is a little soft compared to the original, I will repost later today

John · Post by **John** » Thu Aug 25, 2016 11:48 am

The file size is quite small, so maybe upping that to about 400K would sharpen it up a bit.

It's a nice shot of your model, but I'm feeling it's a little bland, a bit literal. I also find the left armpit a bit distracting?

Hope that helps!

stopher002 · Post by **stopher002** » Thu Aug 25, 2016 7:00 pm

Another from the same set

Paul Jones · Post by **Paul Jones** » Mon Aug 29, 2016 7:12 pm

Very, good-looking girl.

Nice colours and tones in the first image.

I think I prefer the facial expression on the second image, and it would be interesting to see it in colour to decide whether colour or mono works better.

I hope you get to work with her again and see what else you can come up with. She has potential.

Atherton & District Amateur Photographic Society