Melissa at the Beach

[Paul Jones]

Taken from my latest Blog post - http://www.pauljones.org/?page_id=55

Feel free to comment, good or bad.





Thanks
Paul

[John]

Works for me....

[PhilipHowe]

Paul, what John said.

[KEASLA]

1. Looks good but I dont like her in the middle.

2. She does not look comfy and she looks old compared to the other images.

3. Fine just the sky at the top looks a little burnt out.

[Paul Jones]

All comments gratefully received. Thanks.

[PhilipHowe]

The second one is my favourite.

[Janice Freeman]

Great photography Paul, however, the arms in image one and two bother me a little. In the first image, the arm trailing into the grass makes it look slightly deformed - as in the second image where the right arm is almost hidden away. They both draw me away from a beautiful model. Hope you don't mind me commenting

Janice

[Paul Jones]

The second one is my favourite.

Cheers Phil.

[Paul Jones]

Hope you don't mind me commenting

Not at all Janice. You should never be afraid to comment.

[Paul Jones]

If you're interested, I've just added more images 'Melissa at the Beach (Part 2)' to my website.
Link - http://www.pauljones.org/?p=672