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Melissa at the Beach
Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 10:50 pm
by Paul Jones
Taken from my latest Blog post -
http://www.pauljones.org/?page_id=55
Feel free to comment, good or bad.
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Thanks
Paul
Re: Melissa at the Beach
Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 11:29 pm
by John
Works for me....
Re: Melissa at the Beach
Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 11:41 pm
by PhilipHowe
Paul, what John said.
Re: Melissa at the Beach
Posted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 9:07 pm
by KEASLA
1. Looks good but I dont like her in the middle.
2. She does not look comfy and she looks old compared to the other images.
3. Fine just the sky at the top looks a little burnt out.
Re: Melissa at the Beach
Posted: Wed Aug 07, 2013 5:12 pm
by Paul Jones
All comments gratefully received. Thanks.
Re: Melissa at the Beach
Posted: Wed Aug 07, 2013 7:30 pm
by PhilipHowe
The second one is my favourite.
Re: Melissa at the Beach
Posted: Wed Aug 07, 2013 10:13 pm
by Janice Freeman
Great photography Paul, however, the arms in image one and two bother me a little. In the first image, the arm trailing into the grass makes it look slightly deformed - as in the second image where the right arm is almost hidden away. They both draw me away from a beautiful model. Hope you don't mind me commenting
Janice
Re: Melissa at the Beach
Posted: Thu Aug 08, 2013 12:32 pm
by Paul Jones
PhilipHowe wrote:The second one is my favourite.
Cheers Phil.
Re: Melissa at the Beach
Posted: Thu Aug 08, 2013 12:33 pm
by Paul Jones
Janice Freeman wrote:
Hope you don't mind me commenting
Not at all Janice. You should never be afraid to comment.
Re: Melissa at the Beach
Posted: Mon Aug 12, 2013 9:58 pm
by Paul Jones
If you're interested, I've just added more images 'Melissa at the Beach (Part 2)' to my website.
Link -
http://www.pauljones.org/?p=672