One of my photos from this mornings critique; It was suggested a full colour version, A sepia version & possibly loose some from the sky + the gate from the left hand side. I've had a go at the suggestions, please tell me what you think?
Original:
Colour:
Sepia:
Still looking through my photos for a dead dog or horse for another photo!
Critique Suggestions From this Morning
Critique Suggestions From this Morning
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Sue
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Re: Critique Suggestions From this Morning
Interesting. I'm finding I like the colour version best now, but partly because there isn't much colour, making it look like it's partially faded.
I haven't got a dead dog or horse handy, but I might be able to arrange a cat...... (animal lovers please note this is a joke!)
I haven't got a dead dog or horse handy, but I might be able to arrange a cat...... (animal lovers please note this is a joke!)
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Re: Critique Suggestions From this Morning
The colour version definitely for me.
I probably went over the top with my critique this morning, but just found the original too 'samey' to what I see other people doing all the time.
It's a good shot nonetheless. Well done Sue.
I probably went over the top with my critique this morning, but just found the original too 'samey' to what I see other people doing all the time.
It's a good shot nonetheless. Well done Sue.
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I agree. Colour for me & also prefer the crop on the left hand side.
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I also like the crop, removal of gate and the colour version. The sort of image that a do like.
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Re: Critique Suggestions From this Morning
Sue - which do you prefer?
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